A trip to Ocean Park
12 May 2020
"Faster, faster. " I mumbled. I could not keep my mouth shut as excitement rush through my veins. My parents were bringing me on a trip to Ocean Park! The journey there seemed to take ages. Ultimately, we arrived at our destination. After a short time, we reached the cable car tower.
Enthusiastically, we got into an empty cable car. The view out of the cable car of the arrays of mountains protruding into the South China Sea was second to none. It was spectacular! The ships were like tiny dots sailing in the deep blue sea and the people looked like tiny little ants from high above.
After that, we went to the crazy gallon. When I saw this ship, my legs trembled and said "Nooooooo! " But driven by curiosity, I got aboard the ship. "This is the most horrible game I have ever had!" I whined on board.
Then, we set off to the bumper blaster. The most I desired to play it in the Ocean Park. I played it with my father several times because it was playful and I loved the exhilarating speed. When I finished the game, a gigantic grin spread across my face and my eyes lit up like the sky on the first of October.
When night fell, we went to watch the" Shark Mystique". There were over 100 sharks of all sizes, shapes and colours. They were swimming around us. I could take a closer look to the sharks by using the 360-degree windows. I loved the sharks, especially the big white sharks because they had a mouth full of razor sharp teeth and they could even slice an adult half in one bite. When I saw these creatures, my heart was throbbing with excitement.
Eventually, it was time to depart. I headed home worn-out but still in high spirits. I had a magical time at Ocean Park. I hoped to be able to visit again.
"Faster, faster. " I mumbled. I could not keep my mouth shut as excitement rush through my veins. My parents were bringing me on a trip to Ocean Park! The journey there seemed to take ages. Ultimately, we arrived at our destination. After a short time, we reached the cable car tower.
Enthusiastically, we got into an empty cable car. The view out of the cable car of the arrays of mountains protruding into the South China Sea was second to none. It was spectacular! The ships were like tiny dots sailing in the deep blue sea and the people looked like tiny little ants from high above.
After that, we went to the crazy gallon. When I saw this ship, my legs trembled and said "Nooooooo! " But driven by curiosity, I got aboard the ship. "This is the most horrible game I have ever had!" I whined on board.
Then, we set off to the bumper blaster. The most I desired to play it in the Ocean Park. I played it with my father several times because it was playful and I loved the exhilarating speed. When I finished the game, a gigantic grin spread across my face and my eyes lit up like the sky on the first of October.
When night fell, we went to watch the" Shark Mystique". There were over 100 sharks of all sizes, shapes and colours. They were swimming around us. I could take a closer look to the sharks by using the 360-degree windows. I loved the sharks, especially the big white sharks because they had a mouth full of razor sharp teeth and they could even slice an adult half in one bite. When I saw these creatures, my heart was throbbing with excitement.
Eventually, it was time to depart. I headed home worn-out but still in high spirits. I had a magical time at Ocean Park. I hoped to be able to visit again.
Good try of using ' I could not keep my mouth shut as excitement rush through my veins.'
回覆刪除謝利米哥哥,
刪除I will try more using the "金句".